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I am glade[glad] to[be/come] here for your interview 【动词不定式缺少谓语be或come,glad拼写错误】
My name is Makun and [I am]30 years old【前后主语不一致，不能省略】
I came [改为come]from Huang shan【表示一般事实，用现代式】
There are some famous persons [who]were born here[there]【定语从句的关系代词做主语，不能省略,here会被误认为代指你现在讲话的地点。】
My undergraduate and postgraduate accomplished ..改为[I accomplished my undergraduate..University]【人作主语，而非物，如是物做主语，应用被动语态was accomlished】
my father, my mother, my wife, my son and me(I).【用人称代词的主格】
There are five persons[改为people] in my family 【person强调个体，people复数名词】
such as reading[books], listening [to] music[s] and [playing]sports【类比，要形式相同】
Basketball is my favorite sports[sport].【sport具体强调哪种运动，用单数】
I have published a series of papers in these[those] areas.【those更合适】

Good evening, my dear teachers. I am glad to be here for your interview.
My name is Makun and I am 30 years old. I come from Huangshan, a picturesque city in Anhui province with rich cultural background. There are some famous persons who were born here, such as Hu jingtao, Hu shi, Zhu xi and so on.
I finished my undergraduate and postgraduate studies at Anhui Normal University. I graduated in 2008. I am a Physics teacher at Huangshan University.
There are five persons in my family, my father, my mother, my wife, my son and myself. My parents are farmers, they live in Lu’an, a city of AnHui province. My wife works at the same university with me. I have a two-month old son. .
I have some hobbies in my spare time，such as reading, listening music and sports. Basketball is my favorite sport. I was a member of varsity basketball team while I was in college.
In the aspect of scientific research, I am passionate about the theory of atomic structure and I have published a series of papers in these areas.